Talk:Jiaozuo

please review my article

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Hello! This is a student Wikivoyage assignment. I would really appreciate feedback from experienced Wikivoyage editors. Please let me know if there are any issues I should fix. Thank you! MouFengcoo (talk) 19:38, 16 December 2025 (UTC)Reply

@MouFengcoo: Don't use bold on subheadings. I've fixed some, but please continue to tidy these up going forward. Please review the changes I made to the section "Eat". We don't use subheadings for individual dishes on Wikivoyage. Please make listings for the hospitals listed in "Cope" with information on the hospitals' locations, etc., and add descriptions for each of the city's regions. --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 22:57, 16 December 2025 (UTC)Reply
@SelfieCity:Thank you for your feedback. I have completed the editing as requested. MouFengcoo (talk) 07:26, 18 December 2025 (UTC)Reply
@MouFengcoo: many of the subheadings are still in bold. Please correct this, thank you. --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 13:59, 18 December 2025 (UTC)Reply
@SelfieCity: All subheadings have been corrected. Thank you for your feedback. MouFengcoo (talk) 14:11, 18 December 2025 (UTC)Reply
@MouFengcoo: Great, thanks! --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 14:37, 18 December 2025 (UTC)Reply

Peer Review for Jiaozuo Article (Activity 14.1)

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Hello,

I am reviewing your work on the Jiaozuo article as part of our class's peer review activity. The article is very detailed, and the listings in the "See" and "Eat" sections are excellent and full of practical information.

Here are a few suggestions to make it even better:

1. Missing "By plane" section: Jiaozuo does not have its own commercial airport. It would be very helpful to add a "By plane" section explaining that travelers should fly into Zhengzhou Xinzheng International Airport (CGO) and then take a high-speed train or intercity bus to Jiaozuo.

2. Structure: The "Understand" section currently flows directly into "Regions" and "Climate". It might be better to use sub-headings (like === Climate ===) inside the Understand section for better readability.

3. Check coordinates: For a few of the newer listings (like the villages in the Do section), double-check that the latitude and longitude are accurate so they map correctly.

Overall, great job expanding the article!

~~~~ HANBOWEN1022 (talk) 08:06, 23 October 2026 (UTC)Reply

Request for final review - Jiaozuo article

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Hello, our group has finished the Jiaozuo article for our course. Could an experienced editor please review it and let us know if anything needs fixing? Thank you! Wangzixuan427 (talk) 06:43, 27 October 2026 (UTC)Reply